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Mirror, mirror, on the wall,
Watch it crumble, break and fall.
Look at all the bloody glass,
How it reminds them of a severed past.
Watch a reflection slowly disappear,
Looking at all the shattered, crushed mirrors.
A breathless state of mind goes by,
Am I just alive or did I die?
Confused and in an awe,
Careless people unknown to what one saw.
Throat slit so one can't be unlocked,
Too bad the thoughts have become blocked.
Crimson splatters, dripping, breaking away,
Thou shall not know the feeling of all the pain.
Oh, Mirror, mirror on the wall,
Why did you crumble, break and fall?
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demonrobber Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Quite dark. Many people have a poor self-image and self-harm as a result. There is a lot of pressure to look good and fit in. An excellent portrayal of the doubts and stresses we all feel. Great job!
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Phan5everx2 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is quite dark. I wrote a poem exactly about that, self harming because of bad self image. It was actually inspired by this and quite a few others, sadly a well known feeling.
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pokemon22255 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cool!
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MelianOfMist Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That should have read "touch it to an ancient tomb stone"  gawd... .
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MelianOfMist Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh!  Broken mirrors are bad luck!  

Mirrors hold a lot of magic!  I don't know about poems about broken mirrors, but be careful young lass!  Better safe than sorry.  Quick! Spit once and spin three times!  It works for me... Or, and definitely does the trick, take a piece of the broken mirror and touch it an ancient tomb stone in a scary graveyard.  

On second thought...  
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MrDpom Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
FINALLY! SOME POEMS THAT RHYME!
I swear people just don't do enough poems that rhyme...

Solid work there though! GOOD! :D 
 
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LalitaRadha Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hold crap chicka. That. Was. Ugh. It makes me think of the Mirror Mirror story I wrote. This is just too cool. ^^
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ArtistOfDawn Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very well done.
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Mheelu Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
What a lovely poem, so heart felt and deep. Thank you for sharing this!
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